Tuesday 1 September 2020

Descriptive Writing

lately in English my class has been doing show don't tell. witch basically means explain what your talking about instead of saying what it is straight up. We had a task of describing one of our friends or a make up friend.


 His hair is like a mop, creamy coloured and floppy. He has a lot of things that elephants have actually, like big ears, VERY smart and loads more. He is 14 but he is very bulky, it makes him look like he is 17 years of age. He always tries to act cool around his mates. But he is very calm and kind around basically anyone or anything, like his classmates, teachers, and just random people. He has a KTM 450 but he can't really ride very well, one time we were riding on our dirt bikes, we were in an open paddock and there was one tree just in the middle of the paddock. Somehow he hit the tree. I have a Kawasaki 140 and I can still beat him in a race. The things that he likes are his family, his pets are like the things he cares most about, just any animals and his dirt bike, we always go riding with him around our farms on the bikes. 

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